Sunday, January 13, 2013

No.3 - Response essay of Adora Svitak's presentation

No.3 - Response essay of  Adora Svitak's presentation

 Today, we watched a video that Adora Svitak talk about children and adults. She said adults have to learn things from children. Shen is really young writer. In this post, I will talk about my response to Adora Svitak's presentation.

 She talked that children has things that adults have to learn. I agree with this opinion. She told to us that children think easier than adults. Yes, that's right. When I do something with my younger brother, he always finish first. But when they are oder, they cost a lot of time to think what to make and what will be best thing. Also, children have clear mind. She didn't talk about this I think. But I think it's the most important thing that audlts have to learn to chlidren. They have clear mind they are not selfish. They are all kind to everyone. When they have some food, they always want to share it. For example my younger brother is sick but he always want to get some sweets and give it to his friend. Althogh he can not eat sweets! I think I have to learn that too. But I'm not saying that only adult have to learn to children. Of course they have more knowledge that children have to learn, but I think they have to learn this kind of things from children.

Next, I agree that world is unfair to children and audlts. Yes, I know that we have to be older to do some economy things. But maybe some people like Adora Svitak can be better than other audlts. But they don't listen to children because they think we are too young to do things. So, as she said, she wrote her book and went to the book company for children but they didn't allow her. It's unfair. I can understand when it's adult's book company but it's children's book company. They have to allow her. Nobody know that it will be famous book. They have to destryo the discrimination between children and adults in this kind of situation.

I hope that discrimination between audlt and children will be destroyed. No, it must destroy for our next generation! Thank you for your time.

1 comment:

  1. Very well-organized essay. Your ideas are clear and explained well and with good examples.

    Please be careful of simple spelling mistakes.

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